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Spring for Joanna

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This is my entry to Joanna's:iconjoannamoory: traditional contest,it can be found here.[link]
I used 2 of her references. and



:iconyellowrose1plz::iconyellowrose2plz::iconyellowrose3plz::iconyellowrose4plz::iconyellowrose5plz::iconyellowrose6plz:
I used:
Winsor and Newton Cotman 45 Half Pan Studio Watercolour Set
on winsor & newton watercolor paper 300grm CP
:iconyellowrose1plz::iconyellowrose2plz::iconyellowrose3plz::iconyellowrose4plz::iconyellowrose5plz::iconyellowrose6plz:

:iconthankyou1::iconthankyou2: all :iconlovelyheartsplz:
so very much for viewing and commenting!:iconbeauroseplz:
Image size
3051x2275px 5.25 MB
Make
SONY
Model
DSC-W170
Shutter Speed
10/300 second
Aperture
F/3.3
Focal Length
5 mm
ISO Speed
100
Date Taken
Mar 15, 2013, 1:39:19 PM
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:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Impact

Vision- Very beautiful. Amazing detail for a watercolor piece. But the corner with the cool colors takes away from the piece as a whole; it makes the work look unbalanced.
Originality-
Technique- Very nicely done. The white lines and black shades adds great detail. The colors are blended nicely and shows that the artiest has a lot of practice with watercolor. Referring back to my comment about the cool color corner; instead of having the focal point on the butterfly the cool colors draws the viewers' eyes away from the rest of the image. Also if the butterfly is the intend focal point it's too close to the center of the work. (refer to the rule of thirds)
Impact- Overall pleasing; would like to see more.